An interesting take. I always imagined the creeper as a fungus, that explodes to spread its spores, which then feed on anything killed in the process. Animation was great, so was the audio. 10/10!
I liked it
But I had a problem with two things:
The audio for the beginning lines was a bit choppy
There probably weren't enough frames for the arm expandy-swoosh-things, meant to show a fast motion. It kinda just looked like he had very slow fat on his arms. Basically, I;m asking for more frames.
Other than that, I can't find any other problems, the characters were well drawn, etc, so GJ on that.
I love the vid, but I gotta say, the Easter egg scene was the icing on the cake that made my write a review. (HINT: its on the main menu)
But, the animation could be a little smoother...
Also, I half expected the monster thing to be Nana (the pink Ice Climber)
I always love Minecraft flashes. Now if only we could get some Terraria up in here... Oh, the souls I'd steal and then sell for animatorial prowess. Great flash, really amusing, though I was expecting something about 360 = circle, Minecraft = cubes, but that's just me beginning to ramble, so I'll stop.
P.S. Happy Birthday!
Thanks ever so much! Glad you liked the flash :)
Well, I'm not going to put in a lot of effort for a detailed review, ill make a list:
1. SPELL CHECK!
2. Get the lyrics right, not "Hat let you science", its "Aperture Science" (the name of the company), as well as many other lyrics mistakes.
3. This song has been animated MANY times, and its old news. Most other versions didn't have the other problems either.
4. Drawing quality was fairly low.
You cant blame me much on the Bad Quality, because im kind of new to this "Animation creating thing" So I mostly rushed. But my next submission, I will actuly TRY to make it good. :D
Well, since none of the other reviewers said anything I can agree with (like reviewing the song vs your work), I'll post something:
While I do like the idea of animating words to go along with audio (Dot Dot Dot for example), I feel like a bit more effort could have been put in. There was one point in particular where the text would proceed in groups of 4-5 words, and wasn't really synced with the words (Starting with the words "Holy Cow!"). Early on, some words went off the screen, which should be an easy fix. Other than that, you should probably add some more backgrounds, fonts, colors, and some new ways to have the text appear, rather than just popping up. And, maybe put a bit more effort into the drawings, or at least incorporating them.
I did like some of the minor jokes in the words, like having the letters of "Siamese" fused together, but other than that, its not all that special, tbh.
Hopefully you find this helpful for any future projects, and I hope I didn't make myself sound like an ass. Also, if you want to see what I mean by different animation for the words, check out Dot Dot Dot if you haven't already, it was VERY popular.
Yes, I've seen Dot Dot Dot.
The problem is, I can't actually draw. I used character art from a game I'm making that took *forever* to draw. As for the sync, I thought it synced well, but I'm not good with hearing that kinda stuff. The words going of the screen was probably because you didn't have an OSX computer(I used fonts like Apple Casual).
Ya, I guess I should have used some tweens and keyframe animations.
Thank you for your review :)
Lol "Face in Two Palms" made me laugh so hard, I had to comment
Since "HeWhoOwns" (the guy below me" has some sort of mental issue and thus can't figure out wtf is wrong with his computer (mine worked fine) AND THEN feels the need to post his idiocy, I'm writing this to mostly counteract his stupidity.
Otherwise, the animation was pretty good, though there were some points where, for example, his legs ended before the bottom of the screen, or something, but thats not too big a deal. Music isn't my thing, but the animation went well with it, and I'm not one of those people who votes bad because I dislike the genre.
Scoring: 7/10 +3 for that guy
I'm glad you enjoyed my animation :)
And I think the reason for the thing with the legs was that I set with and height a bit wrong.
It should be fine now.
I Like it
the only thing I would change would be the text. Its always great when you put voices in, and if you replaced the text with voice, it would be really nice. (Subtitles are useful too if you do decide to do so, just in case some voice overs are harder to understand because of whatever reason).
Ironically, I do a fantastic Sonic the Hedgehog impression. I prefer text, it keeps the filesize low, and I honestly don't know how Tails should sound. Trust me, the voice clips I have are... not good. Still, I'll use the occasional voice clip, and I'll have all the usual sounds you might hear from Link (Hya, Rah, Oof, etc).
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